Just back from vacation, I have a copyeditingchallenge for you. It is from asmall sign in our pleasant Washington, D.C., hotel room. A sign with this message sat on thewindowsill:
ATTENTIONDue to the Preponderance of Mosquitoes in the National Capital Area, we ask that you only open the windows in case of an emergency.
Would you make any changes to render themessage more clearly, concisely, and correctly?Please share your revision.
Happy July 4!
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